What is a third person omniscient narrator

What is third person omniscient point of view? Third person omniscient point of view is the perfect perspective for writers who want to play god. We’re going to define this specific type of point of view by looking at examples from video essays and literature. By the end, you’ll know why third person omniscient POV is considered by many to be the most empowering literary perspective.

The third person omniscient point of view is just one type of point of view – there are tons more. So, what is point of view? Well, quite literally, point of view is the perspective through which a story is told.

First person point of view is when the narrator is directly telling the story, i.e., “I went to the store today.” Second person point of view is when the reader is put into the shoes of the narrator, i.e., “You went to the store today.” Third person point of view is when the narrator is an outside observer, i.e., “They went to the store today.”

For more on third person point of view, check out this lecture from author/editor Dianne Callahan.

Callahan analyzes third person point of view from bottom to top, from limited and omniscient perspectives, to advantages and disadvantages. But before we get too far ahead of ourselves, let’s first break down the third person omniscient definition.

Third person omniscient point of view is a third-person literary perspective that offers omniscient insight into one or more character’s minds. Third person omniscient point of view is used to shine an all-seeing eye on a story’s character(s) and world.

Third person point of view is separated into two major types: limited and omniscient. So, what’s the difference between third person limited point of view and third person omniscient point of view?

Well, in limited point of view, the narrator’s knowledge is limited. Conversely, in omniscient point of view, the narrator’s knowledge is limitless.

For readers, in a "limited" POV, you'd only have full access to a one or more character's heart and mind (but not every character).

With an "omniscient" POV, you'd have full access to any and all characters.

Omniscience simply translates from the Latin omni, meaning “all,” and sciens, meaning “knowing,” as “all-knowing.”

WHAT IS THIRD PERSON OMNISCIENT POINT OF VIEW?

Why write in third person omniscient?

Now that we know what third person omniscient point of view is, let’s examine how it’s used. This next video from Reedsy does a great job of not only explaining how to use third person omniscient POV, but when to use it as well.

Here’s a simple way to think of yourself as a third person omniscient narrator: you know everything. The librarian’s birthday? You know it. The temperature outside? You know it. The secret to the universe? You know it – well the secret to that fictional world’s universe at least.

Third person omniscient point of view gives writers the ability to express exact details about a diegesis at any point in time.

Here’s an example from Pride and Prejudice:

Mrs. Bennet was in fact too much overpowered to say a great deal while Sir William remained; but no sooner had he left them than her feelings found a rapid vent. In the first place, she persisted in disbelieving the whole of the matter; secondly, she was very sure that Mr. Collins had been taken in; thirdly, she trusted that they would never be happy together; and fourthly, that the match might be broken off. Two inferences, however, were plainly deduced from the whole: one, that Elizabeth was the real cause of the mischief; and the other that she herself had been barbarously misused by them all; and on these two points she principally dwelt during the rest of the day. Nothing could console and nothing could appease her. Nor did that day wear out her resentment. A week elapsed before she could see Elizabeth without scolding her, a month passed away before she could speak to Sir William or Lady Lucas without being rude, and many months were gone before she could at all forgive their daughter.

Determining your novel’s point of view (POV) is one of the most important decisions you, as an author, will have to make. It might seem like a simple thing or maybe one that you decided without much thinking, but your POV can really make or break your story.

One of those points of view is third-person omniscient, a type of third-person narration that grants you a bigger scope to play with than any other POV. 

If you haven’t checked it out yet, click here to read our article on point of view. It will give you a nice primer on all the POVs.

Once you’ve got the feel for them, I’m going to cover why third-person omniscient might work for your story. In this article, we’ll cover:

  • What third-person omniscient POV is
  • Why you might want to use it
  • How to write in third-person omniscient

By the time we’re done, you’ll be as all-knowing as the omniscient narrator you’re writing.

What is Third-Person Omniscient?

Let’s break down “third-person omniscient” into its two parts.

Third-person POV is a narration style where the narrator isn’t a character in the story. They’re detached from the events of the tale, providing more breadth for their narration than first-person perspectives.

Omniscient means the narrator is not limited to a single character’s perspective at any given time. This might mean they know everything or can know everything that is going on in the story, or they just know more than what any one character knows. This is the opposite of third-person limited narration, where the narrator is confined to a single character at a time.

Smash them both together and you get third-person omniscient narration: a detached, non-character narrator who can tell your reader what’s happening behind closed doors, in multiple character’s heads, and interject some information your characters don’t know yet (how suspenseful!).

Before we go on, it’s important to note that, though a third-person omniscient narrator isn’t a character in the story, they almost become a character themselves. We’ll chat about this more when we cover how to use third-person omniscient POV, but know that this kind of narrator develops their own voice, quirks, and sometimes even flaws.

With that said, let’s look at why you’d want to use third-person omniscient POV.

What is a third person omniscient narrator

Third-person omniscient provides a bigger scope than other POVs.

Why Use Third-Person Omniscient POV

I opened this article with a bold statement: determining your POV is one of the most important decisions you’ll make for your story. Think of your favorite book. What would it be like if the author had chosen a different perspective? It might still be awesome, but it would be a completely different story, right?

So, with that in mind, here’s why you might want to use a third-person omniscient point of view.

The narrator becomes a character - As mentioned at the end of the last section, a third-person omniscient narrator almost becomes a character themselves. This can add extra depth, flair, and personality to your story. Whether your narrator is somber, serious, or hilarious, some omniscient narrators are the most beloved parts of their stories.

The author as a narrator - When your narrator isn’t a pseudo-character, they can use your authorial voice as their own. This is like writing yourself into a novel, but in a way that won’t make people mad. Authorial narrators are especially common in classic works, where it feels as if you get to know the writer themselves through their narration.

Suspense! - If you’re looking to build suspense, sometimes the best way to do it is by letting your reader know what’s on the other side of the door, even when your protagonist doesn’t. An omniscient narrator can tell us the killer is lurking in the shadows while describing how blissfully unaware another character is.

Share more about characters - One of the drawbacks to first-person or third-person limited narration is that we’re confined to a finite amount of knowledge, especially when it comes to characters. With an omniscient narrator, you can peek into the minds of any character, so long as it contributes to the story. This allows for smooth perspective switching between scenes and chapters.

How to Use Third Person Omniscient

We’ve covered what third-person omniscient narration is and why you might consider using it. If I’ve made you a believer, let’s talk about the things you need to keep in mind when writing with this point of view.

Choose Your Level of Omniscience

First and foremost, determine how omniscient you want your narrator to be.

I know, it sounds kind of silly. But try to keep in mind that not all omniscient narrators are created equal: some writers use a voice that is limited–to a certain extent–while retaining some degree of omniscience.

Take, for example, the Netflix series Never Have I Ever. First of all, it’s hilarious. Second, it’s narrated by John McEnroe who, while only in the series once as a cameo, becomes a character himself. He also has access to the main character’s thoughts and feelings, with a sprinkling of knowledge of external events and other characters’ inner machinations.

That said, McEnroe also expresses surprise at certain events in the show, indicating that he is not completely omniscient.

The same can go for your writing. Will your narrator know everything going on in the world? Will they choose to share that information? Or will they know some things but not others? That’s up to you.

Determine Your Tense

Next, decide whether you’re going to write in past or present tense. It might seem like a simple thing, but it can have a huge impact on your story. Here’s a quick rundown of your two options.

Past tense: The most natural, familiar way of storytelling, past tense tells us something that has happened already. It allows you to control the pace more easily but doesn’t carry the same sense of urgency or natural emotional turmoil as present tense.

Present tense: Immerse your reader by explaining the story as it’s unfolding rather than after the fact. It draws your reader in, ups the ante, and makes your story more engaging. Because of all that captivating you can do, present tense can make character development more effective, too.

Because of the nature of omniscient narrators, you have the ability to switch between tenses fairly easily, too. This POV lets you add in philosophical asides, insert relevant memories, or add in exposition that only an omniscient narrator can pull off, which might take you from present tense to past. Just be careful how you handle this switch; you don’t want it coming off clunky.

Establish Your Voice

If you jump back up to why you should use this POV, you’ll see that the narrator–and by extension, the author–becomes something of a character in your story. More than any character, the narrator needs a distinct, established voice. 

It’s what the reader will be experiencing through the bulk of your writing, so we want to get this right.

Will your narrator be quirky, sarcastic, and full of jokes?

Will they be glum, pessimistic, and only see the negative in a story that follows a hopelessly optimistic protagonist?

Or will they have their own history, like a former detective describing the case that ended their career?

Figure out who your narrator is and establish their distinct voice. Otherwise, why the heck are you using this POV?

What is a third person omniscient narrator

What will your narrator's voice be?

Write Distinct Characters

Just as you need to put the work into your narrating character, you need to focus on making your actual characters distinct. I know what you’re thinking: you should be doing this anyway.

You’re not wrong. However, it’s extra important when writing a third-person omniscient narrative. Since your narrator can get in the heads of your characters, it’s easy to muddy the waters between one character and the narrator. 

Then, when that’s all blurred together, your other characters might become less distinct, too. Eventually you might end up with the narrator’s voice dominating every character trait and personality you’ve concocted.

The solution is to create distinct, well-written characters who can stand out without issue.

Don’t Go Overboard

With great power comes great responsibility, right?

When writing with an omniscient narrator, you have the ability to add in exposition, unique insights, and information that other perspectives could only dream of.

But–and it’s a big but–that means you must be very careful about going overboard with the information you share.

Remember, what you include in a story should be relevant and progress the plot forward. If you’re just throwing in flashbacks or philosophical rants every other page, it will bog your pacing and drag your story into the depths of DNF piles.

When you’re revising your draft, ask if the extra commentary from your omniscient narrator is helpful. Try to be objective about this, because your readers will be scathing.

Be Wary of Spoilers

In the same vein as the last tip, be wary of spoiling too much of your story. This isn’t just for the horror and suspense writers out there, either.

Even if your narrator can see everything, that doesn’t mean they must share everything. If you do, you run the risk of ruining any sense of tension your readers might feel. Tension is a central part of conflict. If there isn’t a chance that our character might not succeed, what’s the point in reading the whole book?

So, when you’re telling the reader about that killer in the shadows, do it for a reason. Share information to heighten suspense rather than diminish it.

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